The Saner Places: Selected Poems
by Alan Brownjohn
by Alan Brownjohn
On Brownjohn Land.
A Fortnightly Review of
The Saner Places: Selected Poems
by Alan Brownjohn
£10.99 | Enitharmon Press | 60 pages
By Anthony Howell.
THE SEAL AROUND my freezer door has perished. I
ring Smeg, and learn that it is called a gasket, and will cost more than a new
fridge to replace. I feel that I am in Brownjohn Land.
With so much of his focus on the small vicissitudes of
life rather than on its more grandiose themes, Alan Brownjohn might be the
Giorgio Morandi of contemporary poetry. I cannot help but associate Morandi,
and his humble arrangements of boxes and jars, with the Italian novelist Italo
Svevo. Born some twenty-five years before Morandi, and a friend of James Joyce,
Svevo was part of the modern initiative, yet wrote in a seemingly conservative
narrative style. His subjects, however, are notably devoid of heavy
significance. His Confessions of Zeno is written as the biography of a
man who wishes to put things straight for his analyst, to whom he has gone in an
attempt to give up smoking. The style is decidedly anti-’Beethovenic’ – and the
same could be said for much of the work of this very English poet. Like Morandi
in visual art, Brownjohn occupies an ambiguous position. Is he an ironic
modernist and a metaphysical force, or is he just a throw-back to Betjeman, as
Morandi was a return to figuration?
Certainly he shares certain Slough-like aspects
of the landscape with Betjeman. Eight-a–side railway compartments with no
corridor – such a gift to rapists! And the drab bombsites of the post-war
years providing the footprint for supermarkets. The poet teaches at
prep-schools, or attends office parties where squeakers unroll, but very often
there is a sense of the countryside out there in the dark, or in the background,
a heritage under siege – grumpily expressed in ‘Farmer’s Point of
View’.
I own certain acre-scraps of woodland,
scattered
On undulating ground; enough to lie hidden in. So,
On undulating ground; enough to lie hidden in. So,
About three times a year, and usually
August.
Pairs of people come to one or another patch. They stray
Pairs of people come to one or another patch. They stray
Around the edges first, plainly wanting some
excuse
To go on in; then talking, as if not concerned,
To go on in; then talking, as if not concerned,
And always of something else, not what they
intend.
They find their way, by one or another approach,
They find their way, by one or another approach,
Dead-pan, downbeat – Brownjohn will sometimes
epitomise anxiety with a disconcerting softness and delicacy of touch. But at
the same time, he is able to access a satirical mode and can wallow in accurate
grotesque, as in his description of his road – the ‘A 202′:
This road, generally, is
one for
The long-defeated; and turns any ironic
Observer’s tracer-isotope of ecology
Sociology, or hopeful manic
The long-defeated; and turns any ironic
Observer’s tracer-isotope of ecology
Sociology, or hopeful manic
Verse into a kind of mere
Nosing virus itself. It leaves its despondent, foul
And intractable deposit on its own
Banks all the way like virtually all
Nosing virus itself. It leaves its despondent, foul
And intractable deposit on its own
Banks all the way like virtually all
Large rivers, particularly the holy ones, which
it
Is not…
Is not…
THE FIRST POEM of his that I got to know was
‘Breaking eggs’ – which is not in this selection, though it can be found in his
Collected Poems. I was struck by the intellectual intensity of lines
that were marshalled around an incident so mundane and particular, and how the
thought was accompanied by an imagery that was made as intense by dint of its
precision.
…She will unclasp each poised, mature
Vegetable’s grip upon itself, leaf
By pathetic
leaf, intently; or crack
The fragile and decorous eggs
The fragile and decorous eggs
With rapid and curt fingers, not smiling.
It would look like no more than cold spite
If it were not her own kind of care; and
It would look like no more than cold spite
If it were not her own kind of care; and
If she could not also, with a mere knife
only,
Take up (precise and chilling miracle)
Each omelette into surging fabric-folds.
Take up (precise and chilling miracle)
Each omelette into surging fabric-folds.
The accuracy of the language and the quality of
the syntax brings to mind Donald Davie’s Purity of Diction in English Verse
(1952), which probably exerted an influence on poets at that
time. A preoccupation with appropriate prosody can be felt even in an ode to
Felix the cat. In fact the pristine language used makes the references to Li’l
Abner and Donald Duck all the funnier. He is good at finding the evocative
verb or the phrase that seems just right. On board ‘The Ship of Death’,
the cutlery scintillates to the throb of the engines
and
From the deck, far off, is it west, you can pick
out an esplanade
With lights like a frippery of beads…
With lights like a frippery of beads…
BORN IN 1931, and thus experiencing childhood in
a time of war, Brownjohn is a socialist, brought up, one imagines, on Russell’s
Sceptical Essays. Something in his patient noting of daily life
suggests that socialist project ‘Mass Observation’. There is a conscience
operating, and Auden can be sensed as an influence, but only slightly, thank
heaven! He is least effective when the target for his satire is too obvious –
foxhunting, for instance, in ‘Pastoral’, and dancing, in ‘Of Dancing’.
But then, being keen on both, my bias should modify this criticism!
With ‘Peter Daines at a Party‘, we get
introduced to a medley of the stock characters who populate Brownjohn Land,
living in urbanised villages near notorious traffic blind-spots, and blissfully
unaware of their own blind-spots. Foremost among these is ‘The Old Fox’, a
predator in civil servant’s clothing, who takes wiliness to Olympian heights in
‘Negotiation’ and later in ‘Procedural’. In both these poems, the system is
beaten by one adept at manipulating its rules; however, in several others, the
participants are not so lucky: minor irritations or discrepancies get piled on
with mounting absurdity until full-scale Kafkaesque paranoia is achieved. At
times, in catalogues of nightmares and preconditions for police states, the
humour reminds me of Morgenstern. The poet is also a respected novelist, and
with the skill of an experienced narrator, he can encapsulate an entire drama in
a poem as perfect as a walnut shell, as in ‘An Orchard Path’. But
often the excitement which his poetry generates is that of discovering the
incongruous line that can nevertheless be explained by reality: ‘Hands deep in
pockets clutching children’s shoes’ is the last line of a poem describing
shop-assistants with kleptomaniac tendencies.
Were he just a purveyor of light verse and
suburban satire, he might easily be dismissed as a latter day Graves, or as
inheriting the mantle of Betjeman. However, as observed, Brownjohn can work the
seam of quietism in poetry; a sense of almost nothing going on that allows the
slightest small incident to resonate.
Something rotates his upper half
anti-clockwise
Roughly ninety degrees to the left, and his legs overhang
The sanded and polished floorboards he hoped might lift
His morale for a new millennium…
…the simple fact
That he can still stand up makes him optimistic.
Roughly ninety degrees to the left, and his legs overhang
The sanded and polished floorboards he hoped might lift
His morale for a new millennium…
…the simple fact
That he can still stand up makes him optimistic.
QUIETNESS IN ENGLISH POETRY is a feature that can be
found in William Drummond’s version of one of the Silvae of Statius,
and in ‘The Seasons’ by James Thomson. Like a Dutch master focused on the
detail before his eyes, a poet may simply describe without the intrusion of too
much comment. This ability to describe is a quality Brownjohn shares with his
less known but talented contemporary, David Jacobs (published by Peterloo). With
Quietism, form fits content as water fits a jug: it’s an abstract fusion that
appeals to creative people who value the plastic properties of their medium. In
poetry, its focus on familiar experiences or tasks that usually go unremarked,
such as breaking eggs, is equivalent to a painter’s preoccupation with
still-life. Significance is downplayed, but something is ‘brought to life.’ A
magic is at work. Brownjohn’s poem ‘Hedonist’ is not a celebration of ‘heady’
libertinage, but a celebration of ‘mere walking alone on the bright
pavement.’
Master of the art of endings which just dwindle
away, many of his finest poems have, like Morandi’s paintings, an unworldly
quality, for all their mundane matter, and this is well expressed by
‘Doorway’.
Where it stood by the roadside, the frame for a
view,
It made the step from one weed-patch to the next
A metaphor…
It made the step from one weed-patch to the next
A metaphor…
For me, this poem evokes the metaphysical and
essentially modernist landscapes of Paul Nash. It is suggested that having
walked through this door you will not be the same. With Svevo-like
diffidence, the poet turns back from that view, walking on to
where this girl smiles, in
apparent sleep…
The poem incorporates vacancy and creates a drama
out of nothingness. It is a poem which exists for lines it contains; an
experience made out of its words. Here, ethics is aesthetics.
ANOTHER POEM, ‘THE SPACE’, is equally enigmatic,
both describing and inhabiting a species of void, which the poet manages to
describe while allowing the meaning of the poem to remain elusive. In much of
his work, there is a spooky dislocation - a kind of link missing that leaves
the reader puzzling – and invites a re-reading. Brownjohn experiments with
cadence and repetition, sometimes for hilarious ends – as in ‘From his
Childhood’ – but not always. In the brilliant twelve-liner (almost a sonnet)
sequence, ‘Sea Pictures‘, he achieves a crystal clear, yet uncannily
remote and disinterested, vision of the panorama afforded by a day at the
seaside that would have delighted Raymond Roussel – whose poem, ‘A View’, has
the same quality. Brownjohn’s ability to perceive detail and make his image
almost tangible is unique. Consider the entirety of ‘A Dream of
Launceston’:
So clear and safe and small,
on the nearest horn of
about twenty-seven
on the nearest horn of
about twenty-seven
steady-breathing fellows
who have me cornered in
a field in North Cornwall
who have me cornered in
a field in North Cornwall
with their overbearing
friendliness (is it that?)
the ladybird allows
friendliness (is it that?)
the ladybird allows
a petticoat of wing
and then recovers it.
And then: one pink-and-blue
and then recovers it.
And then: one pink-and-blue
nose lifts, and a deep note
rides out over the grass
to tremble the yellows
rides out over the grass
to tremble the yellows
of the low primroses …
And ‘Shoo’ I say, and ‘Shoo!’
in my nine-year-old voice
And ‘Shoo’ I say, and ‘Shoo!’
in my nine-year-old voice
each time the dream comes back.
They do not shoo, and I
will not grow up, at all.
They do not shoo, and I
will not grow up, at all.
Reading the numbers on
the twitching ears as if
nothing more happened next,
the twitching ears as if
nothing more happened next,
I crave the freedom of
that tiny elegance
to flaunt itself, and fly.
that tiny elegance
to flaunt itself, and fly.
This selection ends with some poems from his
latest book, Ludbrooke and Others. Ludbrooke begins with a sequence
of sixty thirteen-line vignettes of this incorrigible character, and is a
collection well worth possessing. The poems are as passionate as they are
mirth-provoking – an extraordinary achievement for a poet now in his
eighties.
No one has phoned him for what seems several
days.
Ludbrooke tries one-four-seven-one, the lonely man’s friend.
And confirms it, his last call was on the ninth.
The caller withheld “their” number.’ The adjective ‘their’
Annoys the pedantic Ludbrooke, who detects yet another
Example of political correctness. If only
A plural of persons were phoning Ludbrooke…
Ludbrooke tries one-four-seven-one, the lonely man’s friend.
And confirms it, his last call was on the ninth.
The caller withheld “their” number.’ The adjective ‘their’
Annoys the pedantic Ludbrooke, who detects yet another
Example of political correctness. If only
A plural of persons were phoning Ludbrooke…
Ludbrooke compares favourably with John
Berryman’s celebrated Dream Songs, and establishes Brownjohn as a
significant poet of the twenty-first as well as of the twentieth century. He is
also very good at cats:
They leap without letting on they intend
to,
These cats. Assuming they always do land
In amenable safety, they cling to
Your lap with four paws cold from the darkness.
You shiver at the ice they bring in them.
These cats. Assuming they always do land
In amenable safety, they cling to
Your lap with four paws cold from the darkness.
You shiver at the ice they bring in them.
But slowly your legs regain a heat,
Their claws retract, and the vacillating tail …
So begins ‘A Fear of Wilderness’, from Alan Brownjohn’s The
Saner Places – Selected Poems 2011.Their claws retract, and the vacillating tail …
Anthony Howell, a contributing editor of
The Fortnightly Review (where this review first appearsand a former dancer with the Royal
Ballet, was founder of The Theatre of Mistakes and performed solo at the
Hayward Gallery and at the Sydney Biennale. His articles on visual art, dance,
performance, and poetry have appeared in many publications including Art
Monthly, The London Magazine, Harpers & Queen, and The Times Literary
Supplement. In 2001 he received a LADA bursary to study the tango
in Buenos Aires and now teaches the dance at his studio/gallery The Room in Tottenham Hale. He is the
author of a seminal textbook, The Analysis of Performance Art: A Guide to Its Theory and
Practice; his most recent collection of poems is The Ogre’s Wife, published by Anvil.